This is something that I think about every day. It's just sad that I cannot express it in reality. Things like this can only be expressed by art, and this really shows.
Keep making flashes, lad. You have demonstrated the true reason of art; to not only entertain, but to teach.
Seriously, you and your voice actor group are a bunch of comedic geniuses. all your flashes have everything; witty writing, fantastic characters, and crazy antics. Even if I am confused n some areas, I still laugh my stomach out.
But the writing is horrible. You don't capitalize most words that need to be capitalized, and you spell many words horribly. There are also many punctuation issues in some areas, making it seem like this whole flash (and especially many others from you) was made my child in kindergarten; only that the child has a born talent to draw.
Elven folklore hasn't been used in NewGrounds in such a way as this. You make medieval seem like a modern day New York, which is totally hysterical and well thought out. I can't wait to see what will happen in the future of Khale's life. You really got me interested in this character.
I don't like the fact that there is rock. I mean, this is a story that takes place in the western times, and yet there is modern music. I was expecting to hear some actual old-fashioned cowboy music from the movies, and maybe some dark eerie music for the demonic feel.
I also don't like the camera angles. I thought that the camera looking up to the moon was a bit unnecessary. Also, the Mexican character looking at the camera seemed a bit cheesy and it gave out a feel of ridiculousness.
Now here is one thing that may seem odd for me to call "positive". I love the fact that there is no a single bit of dialouge from the main character. It just feels original and very deep when it comes to the objective that the main character must follow. You don't need an explanation on what the main character feels about his objective, he just does it without hesitation. So don't even make the character say a thing. I like it.
Now there is another flaw that I must point out; you sort of copied Ghostrider's concept in some areas. Just make the story have a better pace and time-line then Ghostrider. That should be easy to do because that movie suck major bullocks.
To conclude, it's a great start for a series. I expect to see large improvements for this series so good luck with the improvements.
Hey, thanks for taking the time to write a review even without all your disapprovals. Personally, I put a lot of thought into the use of the "rock music". I know it doesn't fit the western feel per say, but I think it fits the mood that I was trying to convey. As for the camera angles, I guess its just a matter of personal preference. I can assure you that as the story progresses, it will have nothing to do with Ghost Rider in any way - except for the fact that the main character gets a motorcycle made of bones, and has a flaming skull.
Tru3
All 208 flash Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2009
A great start.
Problems:
-Laughable voice acting.
-Constant amount of flapping jaws rids the story's chance of being enduring.
-Zel? Zel?! What a cheesy name for currency!
-Yeah, the voice acting. Has to be fixed.
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 23, 2008
Outstanding job implementing this classic!
All it needs now is mouse support and strafing.
It's possible... right?
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 11, 2008
The greatest message I've seen in a long time.
This is something that I think about every day. It's just sad that I cannot express it in reality. Things like this can only be expressed by art, and this really shows.
Keep making flashes, lad. You have demonstrated the true reason of art; to not only entertain, but to teach.
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 16, 2008
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That's my only reaction.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 16, 2008
How do you guys do it?!
Seriously, you and your voice actor group are a bunch of comedic geniuses. all your flashes have everything; witty writing, fantastic characters, and crazy antics. Even if I am confused n some areas, I still laugh my stomach out.
glad you liked it! i am lucky with the voice actors i know
Rated 3 / 5 stars August 16, 2008
Great visual presentation
But the writing is horrible. You don't capitalize most words that need to be capitalized, and you spell many words horribly. There are also many punctuation issues in some areas, making it seem like this whole flash (and especially many others from you) was made my child in kindergarten; only that the child has a born talent to draw.
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 10, 2008
Amazing world you have here.
Elven folklore hasn't been used in NewGrounds in such a way as this. You make medieval seem like a modern day New York, which is totally hysterical and well thought out. I can't wait to see what will happen in the future of Khale's life. You really got me interested in this character.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 13, 2008
Great concept! But there are a few flaws.
I don't like the fact that there is rock. I mean, this is a story that takes place in the western times, and yet there is modern music. I was expecting to hear some actual old-fashioned cowboy music from the movies, and maybe some dark eerie music for the demonic feel.
I also don't like the camera angles. I thought that the camera looking up to the moon was a bit unnecessary. Also, the Mexican character looking at the camera seemed a bit cheesy and it gave out a feel of ridiculousness.
Now here is one thing that may seem odd for me to call "positive". I love the fact that there is no a single bit of dialouge from the main character. It just feels original and very deep when it comes to the objective that the main character must follow. You don't need an explanation on what the main character feels about his objective, he just does it without hesitation. So don't even make the character say a thing. I like it.
Now there is another flaw that I must point out; you sort of copied Ghostrider's concept in some areas. Just make the story have a better pace and time-line then Ghostrider. That should be easy to do because that movie suck major bullocks.
To conclude, it's a great start for a series. I expect to see large improvements for this series so good luck with the improvements.
Hey, thanks for taking the time to write a review even without all your disapprovals. Personally, I put a lot of thought into the use of the "rock music". I know it doesn't fit the western feel per say, but I think it fits the mood that I was trying to convey. As for the camera angles, I guess its just a matter of personal preference. I can assure you that as the story progresses, it will have nothing to do with Ghost Rider in any way - except for the fact that the main character gets a motorcycle made of bones, and has a flaming skull.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 16, 2007
THE best Ackbar out of all the Ackbars.
Can't wait for the other one.
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 19, 2007
I felt rather sad after watching this.
Now that Foamy is gone forever, what will rtil do now? Will he make a new series? That would be awesome.